Ok I really want opinions on one of my songs so here is one that I wrote on my own no one helped btw and I'm only 12 so here's my song
A New Start
I feel so alone you left me behind in the rain for years now and I'm tired of this feeling so I'm gonna go out and have fun without you
(Chorus)
You broke my heart (yeah) I'm leaving the past behind me now and I'm gonna give myself a new start without you ohhh a new start
It's winter now and I'm so cold without you baby why did you leave me behind in the rain all those years ago please tell me why you did it
(Chorus)
You broke my heart (yeah) I'm leaving the past behind me now and I'm gonna give myself a new start without you ohhh a new start
Now it's summer and I don't know what to so I'm lonely without you baby and in the spring I can't handle it anymore I'm gonna leave the past behind and get a new start
Fall was beautiful until you left all those years ago and I haven't forgot you and I never will because I love you baby
(Chorus)
You broke my heart (yeah) I'm leaving the past behind me now and I'm gonna give myself a new start without you ohhh a new start
(Ohhh a new start) a new start (x2)